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Thursday, April 9, 2009
Beautiful Butterfly
This week we have been practicing using adjectives and describing words in our writing. Write a descriptive paragraph about this photograph of a butterfly.
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Elijah
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The beautiful flower has white fuzzy pedles. The beautiful butterfly has orange and black stipes. The dlelitful trees are green and soft. The sweet butterfly is the sixe as a bird. The butterfly feels smooth.
This butterfly is as beautiful as a cake. The color is orenge and yellowe there is only one butterfly. The butterfly was on a flower the butterfly is the size of a bee. Maybe the butterfly makes the soud that is buzzy.
Look! A butterfly. It is orange with butiful black long stripes. It has wihte spots some are small,big,and meidium. It even has some yellow spots. It is on a butiful pink flower. If you saw a butterfly how will you discribe it? It feels smooth and soft.
Wow butiful butterflys! Have you ever seen butiful butterflys before? I really like butterflys. Butterflys can be hot red dark orange sky blue yellow and light red. I wish butterflys can be everywhere. The butterfly looks like it is sitting down on a flower.It looks like it is watching the birds fly.The butterfly is orange and black and whight.I wonder if it is resting.I think it is spredding its wings.I wonnder why it is sitting there.
The butterfly has big black lines. It has dots that are black.The butterfly has a black body and the butterfly has white stripes on the end.The butterfly has long lines that comes from it's head and it's dark black.The butterfly looks nasty.Theres only one butterfly.
The butterfly is shape as a heart. It is laying on a butful pink flawer.It has blik straps on buf of the weens. Can you in magen how this mornook butterfly looks like? Did you now that this butter go to Mexico? The butterfly looks sweet.
The butterfly has diffiert colers. They are so pretty & it is so small the butterfly. There are pretty flawoers like blue violet & some green lief in the back. The butterfly got white spot in the wings. And it looks if the butterfly is in the bush is. The butterfly is so smooth & plain.
This butterfly is in the forest on buttuful flowers. It is oraang with yellow spots to. Also small it has brite and orang and wings. It has a small head and a long body now have you saw on like that? The name of it is called Marnark. I guess alot of them are in the forest with the rest of the butterflyes. Also it have a litte bit of red in it the trees are green the flowers are pink. The trees are soft the grass is smooth. It even almost twohungred animals in the forest. Now do it make you insitened?
We been practicing our adjectives or describing words. This butterfly is orane with white dots. The butterfly is maduim sized. I think the butterfly is pretty and it fells good.One anter on his blck face is stading down like a elphent trunk and the other is stading uo like a big old rock. The butterfly is siting on a pinkflower. The brown Branches on the flower is long and tall. The background is full with green. The leave are forest green.
There was a beautiful butterfly that I saw. It had orange on it and black. There were green trees too. I think there was a beatiful blue sky. The size of the butterfly looked like a ''nacho''It looked tough. It looked rubbery and there where pink flowers.
I am going to tell you some ajtuvises about butuflyes her are some .Butufly are red,white,brown,all cooler arond.Did you now that buntfly haves shaps on it.Butflys are as qiuit as a bloone I got to ask all of you how many butflyes do you think in the wold I think that there is 200 of them there coude be more do you now what a butfly smell like I think thay smell kindof funny .Rember have fun. Butfly are shaped like a hart and big and long like a long piecae of paperand butuflyse are larg.
The Buttderfly is outsied. Got whit dots black lins 4 weeingds. It has intenus and small eses. The beautoful butterfly is seting on the flawers they are pink ceied of whit too. The butterfly don't make sonuds like a luidbug don't make sonuds.
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The beautiful flower has white fuzzy pedles. The beautiful butterfly has orange and black stipes. The dlelitful trees are green and soft. The sweet butterfly is the sixe as a bird. The butterfly feels smooth.
This butterfly is as beautiful as a cake. The color is orenge and yellowe there is only one butterfly. The butterfly was on a flower the butterfly is the size of a bee. Maybe the butterfly makes the soud that is buzzy.
Look! A butterfly. It is orange with butiful black long stripes. It has wihte spots some are small,big,and meidium. It even has some yellow spots. It is on a butiful pink flower. If you saw a butterfly how will you discribe it? It feels smooth and soft.
Wow butiful butterflys! Have you ever seen butiful butterflys before? I really like butterflys.
Butterflys can be hot red dark
orange sky blue yellow and light red. I wish butterflys can be everywhere.
The butterfly looks like it is sitting down on a flower.It looks like it
is watching the birds fly.The butterfly is orange and black and whight.I wonder if it is resting.I think it is spredding its wings.I wonnder why it is sitting there.
The butterfly has big black lines. It has dots that are black.The butterfly has a black body and the butterfly has white stripes on the end.The butterfly has long lines that comes from it's head and it's dark black.The butterfly looks nasty.Theres only one butterfly.
The butterfly is shape as a heart. It is laying on a butful pink flawer.It has blik straps on buf of the weens. Can you in magen how this mornook butterfly looks like? Did you now that this butter go to Mexico? The butterfly looks sweet.
The butterfly has diffiert colers. They are so pretty & it is so small the butterfly. There are pretty flawoers like blue violet & some green lief in the back. The butterfly got white spot in the wings. And it looks if the butterfly is in the bush is. The butterfly is so smooth & plain.
This butterfly is in the forest on buttuful flowers. It is oraang with yellow spots to. Also small it has brite and orang and wings. It has a small head and a long body now have you saw on like that? The name of it is called Marnark. I guess alot of them are in the forest with the rest of the butterflyes. Also it have a litte bit of red in it the trees are green the flowers are pink. The trees are soft the grass is smooth. It even almost twohungred animals in the forest. Now do it make you insitened?
We been practicing our adjectives or describing words.
This butterfly is orane with white dots. The butterfly is maduim sized. I think the butterfly is pretty and it fells good.One anter on his blck face is stading down like a elphent trunk and the other is stading uo like a big old rock. The butterfly is siting on a pinkflower. The brown Branches on the flower is long and tall.
The background is full with green. The leave are forest green.
There was a beautiful butterfly that I saw. It had orange on it and black. There were green trees too. I think there was a beatiful blue sky. The size of the butterfly looked like a ''nacho''It looked tough. It looked rubbery and there where pink flowers.
The butterfly is orange and the butterfly is soft and win the butterfly runs away you chace it.
I am going to tell you some ajtuvises about butuflyes her are some .Butufly are red,white,brown,all cooler arond.Did you now that buntfly haves shaps on it.Butflys are as qiuit as a bloone I got to ask all of you how many butflyes do you think in the wold I think that there is 200 of them there coude be more do you now what a butfly smell like I think thay smell kindof funny .Rember have fun.
Butfly are shaped like a hart and big and long like a long piecae of paperand butuflyse are larg.
The Buttderfly is outsied. Got whit dots black lins 4 weeingds. It has intenus and small eses. The beautoful butterfly is seting on the flawers they are pink ceied of whit too. The butterfly don't make sonuds like a luidbug don't make sonuds.
The Butterfly,Look like drok Oerges
an drok black. It Look fentasick.
The Butterfly is seting on the flary he love flary he look uncomfrtable.
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